Tuesday, June 28, 2011

suggested revisions

The girls suggested that I make a more definitive ending paragraph with stating my opinion on the digital media/ technological advances in the industry. Weither I agree with it or what.

I was also having a hard time deciding how to deal with the interview/ profile parts. At the moment I'm kinda making it more essay format, & talking about the industry background first.
A few people suggested questions in paragraph form so.. I'm gonna think about that and play around with it a little bit more.

I talked to my uncle again as well and got a (small) snippet of information about the current project with nasa which I will add in. But honeslty I felt really strong with my draft except for the ending; I'm proud of the effort and research I put in and I feel like all thats left is a little tweaking :)

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